Dard bhara is jeevan ka afsaana hy

**A.SATTAR** · 13th October 2009, 11:27 PM

Dard bhara is jeevan ka afsaana hy
Jis ko apna jaana vo he beygana hy
kis ko jaa kr zakhm yh apna dikhaeye
acha hy chup chap yh aansu pee jaieye

**Najaf Ali** · 13th October 2009, 11:55 PM

Bohut khoob, nice poetry, good sharing. thank u

**Confuse** · 14th October 2009, 12:23 AM

aaj kal kon kisi ki sunta ha,
acha ha akele hi ansoo baha leye jaye

**A.SATTAR** · 14th October 2009, 12:29 AM

Confuse said:

aaj kal kon kisi ki sunta ha,
acha ha akele hi ansoo baha leye jaye

wo already baha rhe han dear

thanks for your comments

**Rashid Jan** · 14th October 2009, 12:46 AM

nice 1

**A.SATTAR** · 14th October 2009, 12:50 AM

thanks brother

**mhafeez** · 14th October 2009, 12:52 AM

A.SATTAR said:

Dard bhara is jeevan ka afsaana hy
Jis ko apna jaana vo he beygana hy
kis ko jaa kr zakhm yh apna dikhaeye
acha hy chup chap yh aansu pee jaieye

nice selection.....sweet sharing...........thx...........**

**saifi88** · 14th October 2009, 01:46 PM

nice sharing.....................................

***KHAN*JEE*** · 15th October 2009, 12:03 PM

BahoOooOoT KhoOooOoB...~*

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