acha lagta hai...........

**Yaad** · 20th June 2007, 02:15 PM

salam ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, yeh mainay pehli martaba urdu likhi hai...............is liye koi galti hoi to mind na karna ...kar bhi lo to mera kiya karlo gay

just kidding..........mainay raaat ek ghazal banai hai ....woh main aap say share kar reha hoonnn....agar koi galti hoi to mafi beshak na dena.....................

**Lucky Noor** · 20th June 2007, 02:31 PM

Bohat zabardast.......... achi shairi ker laity ho.

Pehly chund mesro main talafuz main thora se ferk hai.........baki lajawab hai....... welldone

**iRFAnSajiD** · 20th June 2007, 02:35 PM

Nice sharing brother..
Always keep it up...

**Afridi** · 20th June 2007, 02:37 PM

aree wah bia..
kaia baat hay,...........yeh wakayee ap nay khod leke hay............keep it up

**zeeshan_xpk** · 20th June 2007, 02:49 PM

nice ghazal any way mai nai khabi is ko akhbar jhan mai likha tha

**Yaad** · 20th June 2007, 07:19 PM

shukria janab pasand karnay ka.....................ji haan yeh mainay khud likhi hai

**Fasih ud Din** · 26th June 2007, 09:18 PM

good umair achee kawash hai..
i hope ke aap isse continue rakhen gee taake humein aap ki mazeen shaeri parne ka moqa mil sake.
keep it up

**fassysam** · 27th June 2007, 01:40 AM

Bohat Khuub Janab....Keeo it up

**Yaad** · 27th June 2007, 07:57 PM

thanks bro........pasand karnay ka shukria

**shahzadafzal** · 27th June 2007, 08:05 PM

yaaaaaaaaaaar aap ne bahoot achi kooshish ki!!!!!!!!!!

aap zaror koshish karte rahin insha Allah iss se achi balke bahoot achi achi shairy ker skain gey!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

**Yaad** · 29th June 2007, 07:15 PM

thanks......bro

**cute_charming786** · 29th June 2007, 08:39 PM

Yahan to Har kissi se nazar milana acha lagta hia

kis se ....ji
nice bohat hi khub surat lafzon ka istemal kia hai ap ne
ap ki mazid poetry ka intezar rahe ga