My own Ghazal....

[sniper]

Tu meray saath nahi per tera ahsas tau hay
Beechar gaey per tujah say milnay ki aas tau hay..

Kerdi naam hum nay anaa(ego) kay apni mohabbat
Teray piyar ki per ab bhi humay piyas tau hay..

Khod say tujhay duur ker kay baychain hoon
Zahir na sahi per khayalo’n may tu meray paas tau hay..

Muskarahaton ko sajaya howa hay chahray pay apnay
Ankhain khoosk sahi per dil mera udaas tau hay..

Ankhain purnum, chahra udas aur dil baychain
Teray muutalik bhi jaan-e-ather ya qayas tau hay..




Ather Zaidi

[iRFAnSajiD]

Nice sharing bro..Laikan urdu main likhte to awr
bhi maza aata

[Fasih ud Din]

Boht Pyari Ghazal Share Kee Hai Aap Ne...
Kia Aap Bhi Poetry Karte Ho ?

[Yaad]

bohat khoob.......bohat achi ghazal hai...carry on bro....

[shahzadafzal]

Tu meray saath nahi per tera ahsas tau hay
Beechar gaey per tujah say milnay ki aas tau hay..

Ather Zaidi

hmmm nice sharing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
acha likh aaapne!!

[sniper]

Nice sharing bro..Laikan urdu main likhte to awr
bhi maza aata

Sukria pasand kernay ka Aina koshish karon ga k urdu may likh sakoon

[sniper]

Boht Pyari Ghazal Share Kee Hai Aap Ne...
Kia Aap Bhi Poetry Karte Ho ?

Bohat sukria pasand kernay ka/rose

Janab likhe tau may nay he hay ya

[sniper]

bohat khoob.......bohat achi ghazal hai...carry on bro....

Bohat sukria hosla afzaey ka/rose

[sniper]

hmmm nice sharing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
acha likh aaapne!!

Sukria pasand kernay ka

[fizaa]

buhat zabardast poetry hey wah wah ather buhat zabardast kaafi acha likhtay hain aap

[sniper]

buhat zabardast poetry hey wah wah ather buhat zabardast kaafi acha likhtay hain aap

Pasand ker k hosla barhanay ka bayhaad sukria/rose

[fahimchughtai]

bohat khoob