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    Default suno,, muje achha nahi legta

    suno, achha nahin lagta

    karay jab tazkira koi
    karay jab tabsira koi
    tumhari zaat ko khojay
    tumhari baat ko sochay
    mujhay achha nahin lagta


    suno achha nahin lagta

    tumhari muskurahat per
    hazaron log martay hon
    tumhari aik aahat per
    hazaron dil dharaktay hon
    kisi ka tum pe youn marna
    mujhay achha nahin lagta


    suno achha nahin lagta

    hawa guzray tumhain chhoo ker
    na ho ga zabt yeh mujh se
    karay gustaakhian tum se
    mujhay achha nahin lagta


    suno achha nahin lagta

    k tum ko phool bhi daikhain
    tumharay paas woh mehkain
    ya chanda ki guzarish ho
    k apni roshni bakhshoon
    rukh-e-janan koi daikhay
    mujahy achha nahin lagta
    mujahy achha nahin lagta


    kyun ke ye huq srif mera hai,

    sheri raja

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    bohat hi khoob janab
    تمام تعریفیں اللہ کے لئے
    درود و سلام حضرت محمد صلی للہ علیہ و آلہ وسلم پر

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    nice sharing,

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    Quote SHAH110 said: View Post
    bohat hi khoob janab
    thanks

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    great sharing bro...

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    Quote Rashid Jan said: View Post
    great sharing bro...

    thanks rashid brother

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    great sharing Sheri

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    pasand kernay ka buhat buhat shukriya zaara jee

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    V Good My Bro

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    sheri bhai i think ap ki poem achi ha per ap ko nai lagta k poet kuch zarurat say say zada hi possessive lag raha.akhar yay kia baat hui bhla.

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    Quote alipak said: View Post
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    thanks Ali pak

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    Quote jhil_mil said: View Post
    sheri bhai i think ap ki poem achi ha per ap ko nai lagta k poet kuch zarurat say say zada hi possessive lag raha.akhar yay kia baat hui bhla.
    thanks jhil mil jee

    pyaar main easa hi hota hai

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