wohi log hum say bhichar gay

[Sultana]

jo khayal thy na qayas thy wohi log hum say bhichar gay
meri zindagi ki jo aas thy wohi log hum say bhichar gay

jinhey manta hi nahi yha dil wohi log hain mary hum safar
mujhy her tarhan say jo raas thy wohi log hum say bhichar gay

mujhy lamha bhar ki rafaqtun kay aazab or stayngay
meri omer bhar ki jo pyas thy wohi log hum say bhichar gay

yha khayal saary hain arzi yha gulab saary hain kagzi
gulay aarzu ki jo baas thy wohi log hum say bhichar gay

jinhay kr saka na qabul main wo sharikay rah safar huay
jo meri talab meri aas thay wohi log hum say bhichar gay

yha jo rat din mery sath hain wohi ajnabi kay hain ajnabi
wo jo dhdrkano ki aas thy wohi log hum say bhichar gay

[ismailshadab]

Excellent........attempt............But ..........needs........
improvement..............

Thread the thread........

[abid chandia]

best hi.

[safdar302]

bhai tumhara tu bhat koie or hein kia laka hein my dear

[SHAH110]

نہایت عمدہ کلام ہے بہت خوب جناب

[M Samraiz]

good

[Thinkme1st]

ye designd to nehi hei

[Sultana]

my mother is not anymore.
that"s why this poem is for my mother.
ALLAH HAFIZ.

[hafizbond]

Sorry 2 Know About Ur Mom.
Gr8 Poetry

[Rashid Jan]

great sharing bro....

[Hope]

very nice

[Sultana]

thank"s to all of u.
take care.