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    Angry Dekh Lena


    Khatam hoga zindagi ka
    ye safar dekh lena
    tanha chale jayenge
    hum dekh lena
    zindagi mai nhi
    koi maqam apna
    baad marne k hogi
    qadar dekh lena
    mujhay abhi koi kali
    bhi nhi deta
    phir pholon se mehkay gi
    qabar dekh lena
    tanha hi zindagi mai
    chal raha hoon
    jnazay mai hoga sara
    shehr dekh lena

    ye meri dosri ghazal hai
    pehli ko to kisi ne dekhna bhi gwara nhi kiya
    but kehte hain
    himmat-e-mardan
    madad-e-KHUDA
    agar pasand aye to reply zrur krna

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    zindagi mai nhi
    koi maqam apna
    baad marne k hogi
    qadar dekh lena

    boht achi hai..likhtye rahein

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    thanx

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    nice

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    Quote usmaanwahid said: View Post
    nice
    usman bhai aap k commets parh kr bht khushi hui hai
    thanx

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    very nice...keep it up

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    Very Nice Kalam............

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    thanx to all

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    Very Nice

    Thanks For Sharing

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    thanx hope

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    So Nice G Gr8...!

    zindagi mai nhi
    koi maqam apna
    baad marne k hogi
    qadar dekh lena


    Hamesha Shair Philosophor and Musanif ki qadar us ki mout k bad hi hoti hy...! Keep It Up...!

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    Quote ADNANLIBRA said: View Post
    So Nice G Gr8...!

    zindagi mai nhi
    koi maqam apna
    baad marne k hogi
    qadar dekh lena


    Hamesha Shair Philosophor and Musanif ki qadar us ki mout k bad hi hoti hy...! Keep It Up...!
    aap ne bilkul sahi point note kiya hai
    it's real thanx for liking my poetry

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