zara sa muskurana tum

**a_malik_19** · 6th May 2009, 12:35 PM

khizaoon ki udasi hai jo abb tak din pe chaai hai
baharoon ka haseen mosam kaheen se saath lana tum

ye mana aur bhi tum ko jahan k hain bohat se ghum
mager dunya k meloon main humain na bhool jana tum

mere ashaar jitney hain tumharey naam kerta hoon
ghazal meri sunno jab bhi ghazal main doob jana tum

ager koi tum se... mere barey main poochey tou
faqat itni si khwahish hai mujhey apna batana tum

yahi meraj e ulfat ho k jab bhi yaad aaon tab
bila wajha hi zere lab zara sa muskurana tum

**fesijee** · 7th May 2009, 02:40 PM

very very nice mujhay ap sharing achi lagi.

**a_malik_19** · 8th May 2009, 12:01 PM

fesijee said:

very very nice mujhay ap sharing achi lagi.

thnax k aap ko achi lagi
warna kisi ne notice hi nhi liya

**Thinkme1st** · 8th May 2009, 12:03 PM

zera Sa muskrana Toor geya Mudasir Rana

**a_malik_19** · 8th May 2009, 12:15 PM

Thinkme1st said:

zera Sa muskrana Toor geya Mudasir Rana

yar ye kya tarwa diya hai tu ne mudassar rana se

**ahoor** · 8th May 2009, 01:34 PM

ye mana aur bhi tum ko jahan k hain bohat se ghum
mager dunya k meloon main humain na bhool jana tum

**ahoor** · 8th May 2009, 01:36 PM

ye mana aur bhi tum ko jahan k hain bohat se ghum
mager dunya k meloon main humain na bhool jana tum
yahi meraj e ulfat ho k jab bhi yaad aaon tab
bila wajha hi zere lab zara sa muskurana tum
boht zabardast hai..khas kar oper wala shair..ese hai jese mere alfaz hoon...very nice..

**The DON** · 8th May 2009, 01:48 PM

VERY NICE POETRY...
Mar bhi jaaon to mat rona..
bheegi hoi yadoon ko
jagi hoi ratoon ko
yad krna aour ro lena.....

**a_malik_19** · 8th May 2009, 02:06 PM

ahoor said:

ye mana aur bhi tum ko jahan k hain bohat se ghum
mager dunya k meloon main humain na bhool jana tum
yahi meraj e ulfat ho k jab bhi yaad aaon tab
bila wajha hi zere lab zara sa muskurana tum
boht zabardast hai..khas kar oper wala shair..ese hai jese mere alfaz hoon...very nice..

thanx for reply
ab pta chala k ghazal waqaee achi hai

and thanx to all

**~*hiway*~** · 8th May 2009, 10:24 PM

ji bohat achhi hay, keep it up

**a_malik_19** · 9th May 2009, 08:11 AM

The DON said:

VERY NICE POETRY...
Mar bhi jaaon to mat rona..
bheegi hoi yadoon ko
jagi hoi ratoon ko
yad krna aour ro lena.....

aap ki poetry bhi bohut achi hai

hiway said:

ji bohat achhi hay, keep it up

thanx highway bhai

commets dene ka shukriya

**ahmedwaqas** · 9th May 2009, 08:14 AM

yara tm ko kia ho gya?

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