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  1. 9th June 2009, 01:18 PM #1
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    Default kachi umar ki nadan larkiyan...

    تم مجھے اب بھی یاد آتے ہو
    مگر
    اب تمہارے نام سے دھرکنیں منتشر نہیں ہوتیں
    اب تمہارا ذکر
    تمہارے لہجے کی گمبھیرتا نظروں میں جچتی نہیں ہے
    وہ تمہاری سمندر کی ہم رنگ آنکھیں
    جنہیں دیکھ دیکھ کر جیتی تھی
    اب دل کو چھوتی نہیں ہیں
    اور اب میں تمہیں سوچتی ہوں
    تو خود پہ ہنس پرتی ہوں
    کہ
    کچی عمر میں لڑکیاں کتنی نادان ہوتی ہیں
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    بہت زبردست
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    pasand karne ka shukriya
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    very good poem.
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    thnks bhai
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    Bohut khooob.....
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    wah g wah
    bohut zabardast
    or ye seeti
    shuuuuuuuuuuuiiiiiiiiish
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    achi poetry ha
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    Quote Yaad said: View Post
    Bohut khooob.....
    thnks
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    wah g wah
    bohut zabardast
    or ye seeti
    shuuuuuuuuuuuiiiiiiiiish
    parhtye warhtye ho nahi awain hi pasand aa jati hai ap ko...thnks
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    achi poetry ha
    shukriya janab
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    Baat To Such Hai

    Very Nice Poetry
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