~*~The Mask & Hina (*OWN*) Poetry Collection~*~

[mr_obaid]

JEEATAY GA WOH JISS MAIN DAM HO GA .........

[phototech81]

nice janab bohat achy pehly to khurram bhai ny nice bohat acha sher aur uss ki tashri ki hai bohat pasand aai hai wasy aam halat main to ye sher mazaji hi lagta hai laken aap ny to kamal kar deya hai iss ke tashri kar k keep it up main aap ki aur poetry ka intazar karon ga aur iss k bad jo sher sohail bhai ny post keya hai ye bi kamal ka hai iss ki tashri to bohat mushkal hai ye to bohat kam logo ko samaj aay ga mari tarha haha nice bohat acha selsala hai bohat kuch sekhny ko mily ga ab hina bhai aap ki bi kuch poetry ho jay to zeda maza aay ga khuram bhai jary rakhy ga

[phototech81]

:d

oh nice hina kamal ki poetry hai keya baat hai aap ki nice bohat bohat hi achy aap ny khuram bhai ko iss ley hi sath rakha hai k dono ki poetry kamal ki hai nice janab nice

[cute_charming786]

Hmm nice entry cute_charming_786
ik naram dil entry hai
i like so much design..........
with very soft heart poetry
thnx for sharing

achi jang jari hai THE MASK AuR CUTE_CHARMING786 K darmiyan
dekhte hain dosto kon is jang ko fateh karta hai yan yeh jang jari rahe gi
mere khiyal sy yh ik dosti aur piyari bataaon ki jang hai jise lag rahna chaiye na ke khatam kiya jai.

mai hoon careless lover
from ITDunya

keep it up ... waiting for more from them
umeed hai kuch aur acha sekhne ko mile ga

First Thank U So Much.........................
for liking my entrey...................

aur jang ki jahan tak baaaaaaaaat hia to wo ham kar nahin
rahain hian.....................bas aisay hi time pass kar rahe hian

magar jeeeeeet ................hmmmmmmmmmmmm
wo to mere hisse main hi ani hia...........
The Mask ko to Paghal Khane se hi fursat nahin milti

[TheMask]

[fysalkhan]

acha! chaloo teeekh
kya baat hai g mask sab apki
laghe raho aur is trah apni piyari sharing
ham sy karte raho

vese ap jese insanan ko pagal zaroor kahna chahiye....hehehehe
plz dont mind

[phototech81]

nice janab boaht khub achy bhai achy lagy rahy ji khurram bhai aap apni aik ghazal pori bi post kary na

[TheMask]

First Thank U So Much.........................
for liking my entrey...................

aur jang ki jahan tak baaaaaaaaat hia to wo ham kar nahin
rahain hian.....................bas aisay hi time pass kar rahe hian

magar jeeeeeet ................hmmmmmmmmmmmm
wo to mere hisse main hi ani hia...........
The Mask ko to Paghal Khane se hi fursat nahin milti

Bahi ITDunya Per koi Mental's Doctor Hai yeh Lerki ka Elaj ker do yaar...

Name = Hina Faisal
Nick = cc786
Location = Karachi,Pakistan............

[cute_charming786]

Wah jee Wah Khuram bahi bohat hi piyre bat kahi aap ne
aap ko to sahafat ki dunya main hona chaye tha.........
very great bohat zabardast ........

[cute_charming786]

Bahi ITDunya Per koi Mental's Doctor Hai yeh Lerki ka Elaj ker do yaar...

Name = Hina Faisal
Nick = cc786
Location = Karachi,Pakistan............

Lo Kar Lo Gal...............

Hon Paghal v nasehatan karan gay.............

Inna kolon banda pochay ..................
kadi shseeshay vich apni shakal vaikhe ay

Ulta Choor Kutwal Ko Dantay

[TheMask]

Wah jee Wah Khuram bahi bohat hi piyre bat kahi aap ne
aap ko to sahafat ki dunya main hona chaye tha.........
very great bohat zabardast ........

kia bat achi lagi.....or sahafat ma q JI

[cute_charming786]

kia bat achi lagi.....or sahafat ma q JI

Kion k aap ka andaz kafi Sahafti hia
bohat achay ilfaz use kartay hian

ye main makhan nahin laga rahi
bilkul sachy dil se keh rahi hooooon