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[mr.smart]

assalam o alikum
dosto

main apni ye poste apney ustaad ke naam kerta hoon
main us ka naam bhi likhta lekin us ne wazhey hi nhai kiya k mujhe naam likhna cahiye ya nhain phir bhi mainus k abohut bohut suker guzaar hoon
thanks

[cute_charming786]

Salam
Hmmmmmmmmmmmm great shainring keep it up dear well done

[jaankaash]

uff bohat acha likha hay app nay nice sharing ...keep it up

[Silent Tears]

Very Nice Smart Bhai Kaya Baat Hai.

[cute_fairy]

Kitna sehel jana tha..
khushbowo ko cho lena..
barishaon k mausam mein..
shaam me her ek manzer..
gher me qaid ker lena..
roshni sitaron ki..
muthiyon me bher lena..
kitna sehel jana tha..
khushbown ko cho lena..
jugnoow ki baton me..
phool jaisay aangan me..
roshni si ker lena..
os ki yaad ka chehra..
khuwabnaak aankho me..
jheel k gulabo pr..
der tak saja rakhna..
kitna sehel jana tha..
a nazar ki khush fehmi..
is terhan nahi hota..
titliyan pakerney ko..
door jana perta hai..
IS TERHAN NAHI HOTA!!!

[cute_fairy]

Asslam o alikum,
Sorryyy k ek choti si poem send ker di hai ager aap ko bura lagey to plz delete it..

[jaankaash]

Fairy ..... achi poem hai app ki

[Sham]

nice ..........very nice good work.......keep it up

[editorshahid]

Nice Sharing......Welldone........Kia Baat Hay

[Gr8^Masood]

اسلام علیکم
بہت خوب .... عمدہ انتخاب
امید ہے آپ اُردو ادب کے بزم
کو اسی طرح اچھے اور
معیاری اشعار سے سجاتے رہینگے
شکریہ
محسود