Dill behal jaye toh chor dete hain loog.

**Adeel** · 2nd February 2010, 07:47 PM

Dill behal jaye toh chor dete hain loog.

Koi aour mill jaye toh chor dete hain loog.

Chaar din ki chandni ka kya karna.

chandni dhal jaye tu chor dete hain loog.

Qasmein tu khate hain sada sath jene ki.

Zehan badal jaye toh chor dete hain loog.

Dill badal jaye toh jazbat badal jate hain.

Halaat badal jaye tu chor dete hain loog.

Aaj kal k loogon ka kya bharosa.

Mosam badal jaye tu chor dete hain loog.

Loog dosti karte hain matlab k liye.

Matlab nikal jaye tu chor dete hain loog.

**IT.BOY** · 2nd February 2010, 07:54 PM

wah janab kia bat hai....
nice sharing

**Nahid** · 2nd February 2010, 08:03 PM

very nice poetry ..thanks for sharing

**Aasi_786** · 2nd February 2010, 08:31 PM

Boht umdha sharing hai ...!!

**Confuse** · 2nd February 2010, 10:54 PM

pehle tu aap ki yeh ghazal ache ha , umda ha

phir aap ka nick kia ha , Adeel ya k Ideal samaj nahi aye

**Najaf Ali** · 2nd February 2010, 11:55 PM

zabardast sharing hay g

**FritZie** · 3rd February 2010, 12:06 AM

Buhat Umda

**Shaikh Brothers** · 3rd February 2010, 12:08 AM

Nyc Sharing

**alipak** · 3rd February 2010, 01:12 AM

wah g wah maza aa gya

**Gr8^Masood** · 3rd February 2010, 07:15 AM

اسلام علیکم
بہت خوب .... عمدہ انتخاب
امید ہے آپ اُردو ادب کے بزم
کو اسی طرح اچھے اور
معیاری اشعار سے سجاتے رہینگے
شکریہ
محسود

**Adeel** · 3rd February 2010, 07:16 AM

Confuse said:

pehle tu aap ki yeh ghazal ache ha , umda ha

phir aap ka nick kia ha , Adeel ya k Ideal samaj nahi aye

janab mera nick naam adeal aour real name adeel hai.wese main jub b kisi website main enter hota hun toh adeel ki bajaye adeal likhta hun kyun k adeel aksar already in use hota hai.