Mohabat Toor Daite Hai....!!

[Ayesha1]

ye meri apni shairee hai,parhaye or bataye k kaise lge aapko..or sirf"good" and "nice"sy kam nahi chaly ga kuch comments honey chahiyen..age kahen ghalti hai to woh b bataye,kiunkay main ny aab tak kisi sy islahh nahi li...

[Real_Light]

Ayesha G... wonderful.. kia baat hay ... app nay to kamaal ker dia... bhiee wahah...

jari rakhain . umeed hay app apna taza kalam post kertay rahein gay.



aray desiging to aur be kamal ki hay...

[Fasih ud Din]

kya baat hai ayesha jee aap ki

[Ayesha1]

Ayesha G... wonderful.. kia baat hay ... app nay to kamaal ker dia... bhiee wahah...

jari rakhain . umeed hay app apna taza kalam post kertay rahein gay.



aray desiging to aur be kamal ki hay...

aap ka bohat sukria..ap logon ki taraf sy hosla afzaii hoi to zaroor post krte rahoon gi..

[Ayesha1]

fasih ud din,pasand kerny or hosla afzai ka sukria

[cute_charming786]

lagta hai ap ko bhi sahagird banan pare ga..................

achi khoshish hai magar abhi b ap ko .................thori aur mehnat karni ho gi
blending tool ka sahi istemal nahin kar rahi ap

any way jaisay hi time milta hia main ap ko guide karti hon

[Ayesha1]

blending k motalaq to guide ker dejjye ga,but pehly shairee pe to comments dejye..jis maqsad k liye main ny post ki hai...

[iRFAnSajiD]

very nice.........bahut khoob.......achi poetry hay aap ki
bahut umda...jari rakhain

[Ayesha1]

very nice.........bahut khoob.......achi poetry hay aap ki
bahut umda...jari rakhain

hosla afzaii ka bohat sukria....

[IT.BOY]

[nazar911]

Ayesha G... wonderful.. kia baat hay
ye too mohobaat karne wala hai bati ga ke mohobaat ansa ko ansaniyat sakati hai .na ke toor te hai,but very very nice

[maimoona]

hmmm ... achi lagi .. keep it up
lekin khush raho