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  1. 17th September 2011, 02:01 PM #13
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    very well

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    good dear
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    Nice one
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    Bohat khoob jee
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    بہت ہی ثقیل شعر ہے
    میرے جیسے ممبرز کو تو سمجھو باؤنس ہی جائے گا
    اور ہاں توقیر بھائی کارل میں جب اردو تحریر کی سیٹنگ کرو تو لائن کا استعمال کرو۔۔۔۔ اس سے الفاظ کی ترتیب عمدہ رہتی ہے
    جیسے آپ کے دوسرے مصرع میں یعقوب کی سیٹنگ کچھ گڑبڑ ہوگئی۔۔ اور اسی مصرع میں آخر والا "ہیں" کچھ نیچے چلا گیا ۔۔ پہلے مصرع میں ذکاء میں "کا" کچھ نیچے آگیا ہے۔۔ بھائی بہت ہی معذرت کے ساتھ کچھ اصلاح کی کوشش کی ہے محسوس مت کرنا
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    Kia kehny janab !!!
    Bhot umda !!!!
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    superb work...........keep it up
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    wah wah wah...
    kiya shair hain..
    lutaf aa gaya.....
    bohut duain...
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    very nice............................
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    Bhoot khobb janab
    nice one post
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