us ne kaha main ao gi?

**Uzair143** · 25th January 2008, 12:02 AM

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**usman_samunder** · 25th June 2008, 11:48 PM

good sharing

**Uzair143** · 26th June 2008, 01:03 PM

usman_samunder said:

good sharing

Thank u

**Fighter** · 26th June 2008, 03:56 PM

Very Nice Sharing

**Uzair143** · 29th June 2008, 09:02 PM

Fighter said:

Very Nice Sharing

thank u

**maintumsehun** · 3rd July 2008, 01:28 PM

Uzair bhai. sab se pehlay yeh daikh ker acha laga keh yeh ap ki apni "Nazam" hai.achi koshish ki ap nay magar aik bat jo main apnay p[ont of view se batana chahta hun keh shairi jazbat ka nam hai jo hamaray andar sulagtay rehtay hain.aur yehi jazbat poetry ki shakal main dhal jatay hain. magar "Urdu Adab" main miari poetry wo hai jis main mehboob ya jis k liay poetry ki gai ho us ki jins tak ko zahir na kia jai balkeh parhnay walon kay guess kernay k liay chor dia jai.umeed hai ap samjh gaiay hon gay. thats only my point of view.(Wallah-Aalam-Bisawab)