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  1. 10th February 2013, 09:35 PM #1
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    Thumbs up My First Self Written Poetry For It Duniya...

    Muhabbat Loat Aye Gi Zara Sa Tum Badal Jao...!
    Zindgi Muskuraye Gi Zara Sa Tum Badal Jao......!

    K Wade Jo Kiye Tum Ne Wafa Ki Rah Chalne K....
    Hamesha Sath Jeene K Hamesha Sath Marne K...
    Agar Jo Ho Sake HumDum Wo Wade Yaad Kr Lo Tum...
    Muhabbat Hai Agr Zinda Zara Sa Tum Badal Jao...!

    Muhabbat Loat Aye Gi Zara Sa Tum Badal Jo....!
    Zindgi Muskuraye Gi Zara Sa Tum Badal Jao......!

    Koi Jo Khwab Tum Daikho, Tabeer Dhoond Laon Ga...
    Agr Sapna Jo Bun Lo Tum Ma Tare Tor Laon Ga......!
    Ye Chanda Jo Chmkta Hai Tere Mathe Ki Bindya Hai...
    Ma Wo B Dhoond Loan Ga Zara Sa Tum Badal Jao...!

    Muhabbat Loat Aye Gi Zara Sa Tum Badal Jo....!
    Zindgi Muskuraye Gi Zara Sa Tum Badal Jao......!


    Agr Meri Pehli Koshish Pasand Aye To Plz Reply Zaroor Dijiye Ga....!



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  2. 11th February 2013, 06:25 PM #2
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    nice
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  3. 11th February 2013, 06:41 PM #3
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    wah.......
    nice.......
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    gooooooooooood
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    Nice ...
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  7. 12th February 2013, 10:00 AM #7
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    nice effort
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  8. 13th February 2013, 07:35 AM #8
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    Thanx Hosla Afzai K Liye.............
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    Ager Ye Poetry Designed Hoti To Kia Dhamakey Dar Lagti.
    Ab B Bohat Achi Lag Rahi Hai Sharing Ka Shukriya.
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    ary wah bht ala
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    Very Nice
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