nukta

[mumtaz-aslam]

Hum dua likhtay rahay wo dagha pertay rahay
ik nuktay nay mahrem say mujram bna dia

[sia842]

I think likhne main thori galti ho gai hai
hum dua likhte rahe wo daga perty rahe
otherwise
nice poetry

[sami2]

Barish ko ulta kiya to sharab ban gai
Or sharab ko ulta kiya to barish
Dard akhir dard raha chahe ulta likha ya sidha

[M Imran Mugal]

I think likhne main thori galti ho gai hai
hum dua likhte rahe wo daga perty rahe
otherwise
nice poetry

g drust frmaya ap ne

[M Imran Mugal]

Barish ko ulta kiya to sharab ban gai
Or sharab ko ulta kiya to barish
Dard akhir dard raha chahe ulta likha ya sidha

uuuuufffffffffff.....
babyo kamal kr dita tusi ty

[sami2]

uuuuufffffffffff.....
babyo kamal kr dita tusi ty

thanks

[Zara112]

nice..........

[SMART MALIK]

NiCeeeeeeeeeeee

[Rana Ishaq]

بہت خوب جناب
بہت ہی پیاری شاعری ہے
لاجواب
ہمارے ساتھ اشتراک کا
بہت بہت شکریہ

[Eng Ahtasham]

بہت اعلی

[Baazigar]

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