2 شاعرہ: ماہم عباسی

[Mrs.Waqar]

وعلیکم السلام
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اچھے دوست وہی ہوتے ہیں جو اچھا مشورہ دیں
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پھر
بھی رائے دیے دیتےہیں
شاعری کے حساب سے
بلکل بے وزن شعر ہے
اور
اس میں استعمال کیے گئے لفظ۔۔۔۔تہذیب ۔۔۔اور۔۔۔سوغات۔۔۔
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اس لیے موضوع لفظ نہیں لگ رہا ہے۔
باقی
بہتر ریپلائی تو شاعر دوست ہی دے سکتے ہیں
ہمارے ساتھ شئیر کرنے کا بہت شکریہ
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اَب مجھ سے سنبھلتی نہیں یہ درد کی سوغات
لے تجھ کو مبارک ہو سنبھال اپنی یہ دنیا

!!!ہوتا تم میں اگر اتنا سابھی سلیقہ ِمحبت
تو یوں میری آنکھوں کو اشک کی سوغات نہ دیتے

[Sham AS]

Ahaaan

Meri soch jahan sy shuru hoti hy wahan apki ending hy
Mtlb mjy ap sy b zada pasand hongy

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G g zabardasti ka comment jo nikalwaya hy ap ny makhan hi lagana tha phr to

Ye aksar main kehta hu logo'n se [ Meri soch jahan sy shuru hoti hy wahan apki ending hy ] Aur ap ne tau had kr di mujhay he bol di ye line.... Lekin mazak se hat k main poetry bohat sunata bhi hu sunta bhi hu... but ye jo picture poetry hoti hai na jin k backhround mein girl ki pic laga detay hain log ... Yaqeen mano mujhay poetry ki insult lagti hai...Poetry sada he kamal ba kamal hoti hai ... Aur mat sochiye k main makhan laga raha hu mere pas proof hai k main wakay he poetry like krta hu aur ye harghiz nahi k bus jo larki share kray us mein intrust hai.. poetry jo bhi share kray main intrust leta hu aur ap yehi se dekh lo mere signature mein bhi poetry hai ap mere threads check kro wo bhi poetry pe hain ap meri fb id check kro waha bhi ap ko meri info mein poetry nazar aaey gi aur mera group bhi ghazals & shairo shaiyri k nam se hai facebook pe...yoo'n samjho k meri rag rag mein poetry he poetry hai ...Shukriya

[Maham Abassi]

Ye aksar main kehta hu logo'n se [ Meri soch jahan sy shuru hoti hy wahan apki ending hy ] Aur ap ne tau had kr di mujhay he bol di ye line.... Lekin mazak se hat k main poetry bohat sunata bhi hu sunta bhi hu... but ye jo picture poetry hoti hai na jin k backhround mein girl ki pic laga detay hain log ... Yaqeen mano mujhay poetry ki insult lagti hai...Poetry sada he kamal ba kamal hoti hai ... Aur mat sochiye k main makhan laga raha hu mere pas proof hai k main wakay he poetry like krta hu aur ye harghiz nahi k bus jo larki share kray us mein intrust hai.. poetry jo bhi share kray main intrust leta hu aur ap yehi se dekh lo mere signature mein bhi poetry hai ap mere threads check kro wo bhi poetry pe hain ap meri fb id check kro waha bhi ap ko meri info mein poetry nazar aaey gi aur mera group bhi ghazals & shairo shaiyri k nam se hai facebook pe...yoo'n samjho k meri rag rag mein poetry he poetry hai ...Shukriya

Hahahahha or agr yhi tamam chezaiN apko check krny ka kahun to barabar nikle gy blky meri diarian be intihaa bhari pari hn... m agy nikal jaun g
Chalen rehny dety hn
Muqably ni lgaty.....
R kitni mazy ki bt hy apka point aj apko maraaa
Wesy achi bt hy k ap sb ki poetry m intrust lety hn

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Ye aksar main kehta hu logo'n se [ Meri soch jahan sy shuru hoti hy wahan apki ending hy ] Aur ap ne tau had kr di mujhay he bol di ye line.... Lekin mazak se hat k main poetry bohat sunata bhi hu sunta bhi hu... but ye jo picture poetry hoti hai na jin k backhround mein girl ki pic laga detay hain log ... Yaqeen mano mujhay poetry ki insult lagti hai...Poetry sada he kamal ba kamal hoti hai ... Aur mat sochiye k main makhan laga raha hu mere pas proof hai k main wakay he poetry like krta hu aur ye harghiz nahi k bus jo larki share kray us mein intrust hai.. poetry jo bhi share kray main intrust leta hu aur ap yehi se dekh lo mere signature mein bhi poetry hai ap mere threads check kro wo bhi poetry pe hain ap meri fb id check kro waha bhi ap ko meri info mein poetry nazar aaey gi aur mera group bhi ghazals & shairo shaiyri k nam se hai facebook pe...yoo'n samjho k meri rag rag mein poetry he poetry hai ...Shukriya

Hahahahha or agr yhi tamam chezaiN apko check krny ka kahun to barabar nikle gy blky meri diarian be intihaa bhari pari hn... m agy nikal jaun g
Chalen rehny dety hn
Muqably ni lgaty.....
R kitni mazy ki bt hy apka point aj apko maraaa
Wesy achi bt hy k ap sb ki poetry m intrust lety hn

[Maham Abassi]

!!!ہوتا تم میں اگر اتنا سابھی سلیقہ ِمحبت
تو یوں میری آنکھوں کو اشک کی سوغات نہ دیتے

G madam maan liaa k aap b shairaa bn skti hn

[Maham Abassi]

y to thek bola ap ny..ap sy to bari hn main..chlo dykhti hn
lykn achi koshish hi..insan gltyn sy hi sekhta hi na

Ahaaan g q ni .....
Tbhi feel ni hota ....... k agr sekhna hy to khamiyaan sunny ki taqat b rakho

[Sham AS]

Hahahahha or agr yhi tamam chezaiN apko check krny ka kahun to barabar nikle gy blky meri diarian be intihaa bhari pari hn... m agy nikal jaun g
Chalen rehny dety hn
Muqably ni lgaty.....
R kitni mazy ki bt hy apka point aj apko maraaa
Wesy achi bt hy k ap sb ki poetry m intrust lety hn

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Hahahahha or agr yhi tamam chezaiN apko check krny ka kahun to barabar nikle gy blky meri diarian be intihaa bhari pari hn... m agy nikal jaun g
Chalen rehny dety hn
Muqably ni lgaty.....
R kitni mazy ki bt hy apka point aj apko maraaa
Wesy achi bt hy k ap sb ki poetry m intrust lety hn

Pehli bar aaj koi aisa mila hai jo keh raha hai k main poetry mein tum se aagay nikal jau ga......Never jitni gehrai mein main hu shayas he koi hoga ...main sirf poetry bolta nahi balkay amajhta bhi....Janat hu main tum ko shauq_e_ranai bhi hai shakhsiyat sajanay mein ik ye mahiri bhi hai, Phir bhi harf chuntay ho sirf lafz sunatay ho in k darmiya'n kiya hai tum na jan pao gay

[Mrs.Waqar]

G madam maan liaa k aap b shairaa bn skti hn

kya mtlb main bhi..kya main phly sy ni hn kya

[Mrs.Waqar]

Pehli bar aaj koi aisa mila hai jo keh raha hai k main poetry mein tum se aagay nikal jau ga......Never jitni gehrai mein main hu shayas he koi hoga ...main sirf poetry bolta nahi balkay amajhta bhi....Janat hu main tum ko shauq_e_ranai bhi hai shakhsiyat sajanay mein ik ye mahiri bhi hai, Phir bhi harf chuntay ho sirf lafz sunatay ho in k darmiya'n kiya hai tum na jan pao gay

wah g wah..yhna to mokbla shokro ho gya hi...ab hm kya kryn

[Maham Abassi]

Pehli bar aaj koi aisa mila hai jo keh raha hai k main poetry mein tum se aagay nikal jau ga......Never jitni gehrai mein main hu shayas he koi hoga ...main sirf poetry bolta nahi balkay amajhta bhi....Janat hu main tum ko shauq_e_ranai bhi hai shakhsiyat sajanay mein ik ye mahiri bhi hai, Phir bhi harf chuntay ho sirf lafz sunatay ho in k darmiya'n kiya hai tum na jan pao gay

Ary..... shukar kren koi apki takkar ka mil gya apko wrnaa insaan hawaon m urtaa hy
U knoW hum kch frndZz to btain hi poetry m krty hn......
App hargiz ye ni kh skry k sirf ap hi poery k ashiq hy.

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R b hazaroN log taiRty hon gy is daladal m doobty phirty hnn gy janab
Ap konsi dunyaa m rhty hn

[Maham Abassi]

kya mtlb main bhi..kya main phly sy ni hn kya

Hahahaah pedaishi to ni thi naW

[Sham AS]

wah g wah..yhna to mokbla shokro ho gya hi...ab hm kya kryn

Muqabla kesa just bata raha hu mohtarma...

[Maham Abassi]

wah g wah..yhna to mokbla shokro ho gya hi...ab hm kya kryn

Han nAww.... Ap b apnaa tajziyaa dijiey

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Muqabla kesa just bata raha hu mohtarma...

Hehheehhe mizaj garam