شاعرہ: ماہم عباسی 4

[Maham Abassi]

اچھا شعر ہے
تبصرہ بعدمیں
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ننانوے اچھے کاموں کو بھول کر ایک غلطی کوپکڑ لے وہ ہے
"انسان "
اور جوننانوے غلطیوں کو درگذر کرکے ایک اچھے کام کو قبول کر لے وہ ہے
" الرحمان"

Aryyyy shukar hy apki unglion ny Acha hy to likh dya
Wesy bt to Achi ki hy
Hmy Ap k taweel tabsary ka intizar rahy ga
Shukryaaa

[MALIK R1ZWAN]

بہت ہی عمدہ شعر ہے

[Maham Abassi]

Hosakta hai Aap , Ghaltiyon par Ghaltiyan karti Hoan

By the way Very Impressive Couplet

Thanks for Sharing

Hahaahah may b....
Pr is..................
M ilzam bhoooot lagay jaty hn ik dosry p....

PAsand farmany ka shukryaaa

[Maham Abassi]

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nice maham sis[/QUOTE]

Bhoooot bhoot shukryaaa pasand farmany ka r apny qeemti waqt sy kch hisaa hmy deny ka

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[Maham Abassi]

بہت ہی عمدہ شعر ہے

MuhtrAm NeW moderatOr sahabb!!!!!
Phky to bhoot bhooot mubbArkAan
R phrr shuKryaaaaa b pasand farmany ka

[Saqi Shayar]

Exactly
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Pr ho hi jati hn

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Ahaannn
Apki b kia baat hy

Mje bht dokh ho rha h xham g k bare me xoch k

[Maham Abassi]

Mje bht dokh ho rha h xham g k bare me xoch k

Fazool bton p dukh ni krty

[Saqi Shayar]

Fazool bton p dukh ni krty

Ye apk lye fazol h v good

[Maham Abassi]

Ye apk lye fazol h v good

DaikhAin admins ka koi zati mafad ni tha sham As sahab k sath koi waja hy tbhi bann kia naaw

[Maham Abassi]

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MuhtrAm ap sy guzarish ki jati hy bghaIr tehqeeq k bt nhi krty
M admin ni hun
Ap logon ki trh hi hun bs ye h k ik step agy gai hun
Mery hath m koi authority ni hy
M ksi ko bann ni kr skti
R dosri by ye h k ap log aram sy b bt kr skty h zrori hy kisi ko itny bury alfaz sy nawaza jay.....
Abi sar e aam shAm Sahab is trh ki btAin kr jaty hn to andaZa lgaiyee PM P kia kia bola unhon ny.....
Kooi b yahan ksi ka dushman ni hy......

[saam mughal]

acha hai
apny halaat b kuch esi andaaz main.

[Maham Abassi]

acha hai
apny halaat b kuch esi andaaz main.

Shukryaaa
Ohoooo..........