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    Default Terey Baadaam Karwey Niklen Saarey.

    Mujhey ik baat to batlaao Piyarey
    Ye kaisey chal gaey chakkar tumharey?

    Woh Itnee khubsoorat ha ke jaisey
    Murree,Sawat,Gilgit ke nazzarey

    Lazzat men woh aisey ha ke jaise
    Hon mithey AAM aur AALOO BUKHAREY

    Too khud piyara ha dekhen gar tujhey to
    Sarma jaen sab Banndar becharey.

    Teri Ankhen Battan jaisee hen donoo
    Hen ghaib moon se tere Daant saarey

    Muqaadar phoot jaaney par woh roee
    Tere to ho gaey Waarey Niyarey

    Ye MOHSIN Baddua detta ha jal kar
    Terey Baadaam karwey niklen saarey

    Terey paoon men par jaey chaala
    Terey phat jaen sab ke sab Ghubarey

    Tujhey youhee pakkar le PULS waala
    Tujhey AFSAAR younhee Office men jharey

    Tairee Naak men Ghus jaey MACCHAR
    Tujhey koi na de Paisey Udhharey

    Teri BEEVEE rahey so saal Zindda
    KHUDDA Khaawand ko us ke jald Maarey

    ---====Hafiz Muzaffar Mohsin====---

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    Default Terey Baadaam Karwey Niklen Saarey?

    I think its Eid gift by Hafiz Muzaffar Mohsin?Good poem for humour lovers.

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    Good sharing.
    1__ Aap Inpage urdu main lekny ki koshesh kary
    2__ Aap tamam poetry jo aap yaha share kerna chahta hai.... wo sari aik he thread main post kya kary..........Her aik choice k lye NEW THREAD post na kary...
    Shukeria.....

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    Default Terey Baadaam Karwey Niklen Saarey?

    Dear Lucky Noor sb,
    Thank you for your comments.Dear,how its possible to write down all in single
    sitting because all these Poems are my own witten these are not based on my liking.The lattest one I mean to say "Terey Baadaam" I wrote During my way From Lahore to Multan today and I like to post it today for the members of ITDUNYA.Next time i will however try to do as you said.
    Thanks.
    Hafiz Muzaffar Mohsin.

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    Hafiz Jeeeee koi Aur Aisi Piyari Nazm?

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    Quote muzafarmohsin said:
    Dear Lucky Noor sb,
    Thank you for your comments.Dear,how its possible to write down all in single
    sitting because all these Poems are my own witten these are not based on my liking.The lattest one I mean to say "Terey Baadaam" I wrote During my way From Lahore to Multan today and I like to post it today for the members of ITDUNYA.Next time i will however try to do as you said.
    Thanks.
    Hafiz Muzaffar Mohsin.
    Jannab Main hergez aap ko ye nahi kaha... k aap aik he waqth main sari apni sari poetry post karo... Balky mera matlab hai... k aap es tara Post kya karo...ye Link aap day raha hon... jes tara es main share kya jatha... es tara sharing kerny ko keh raha hon.
    http://www.itdunya.com/showthread.php?t=5370

    Aap k taawon ka Shukeria....
    Wsalam

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    nice poetry...
    Don't Share outer links again, Should B bane next time... ITD Team

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    Bhai Naveed Rashid for your short but impressive comments.

    Hafiz Muzaffar Mohsin

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    hiihhiihhihhiihhihihiihhihihiihih nice yara bhut hi funny si poetry hai maza agay thanks muzaffar bhai thanks
    farooq-o-hassan ka ranj hum kcuh kam nahi kartay,,
    haan mager sina-o-sir peet kar matam nahi kartay,,,
    kafir hain jo munkar hain hayyat-ush-shoda kay,,,
    hum zinda logo per matam nahi kartay.....

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    Lucky Noor sb,Thank U for guidance.

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    Thank U Bhai Obaid ,Aap ko Tere Baadaam,Achi Lagi.Bas Aap jaise dostoon ki Zaara Nawazi ha.
    Hafiz Muzaffar Mohsin

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    naey dost bhi yeh NAZMM parh Len....

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