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  1. 30th May 2009, 08:08 PM #1
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    Default وہ آخری دن تھا

    دسمبر کے مہینے کا شاید وہ آخری دن تھا
    برس گزرے کئی
    میں نے لفظ "محبت" لکھا تھا
    کسی کاغذ کے ٹکڑے پر!
    اچانک یاد آیا ہے
    برس گزرے کئ۔۔۔۔۔
    مجھے کسی سے بات کرنی تھی
    اُس سے کچھ کہنا تھا
    جان جاں! مجھے تم سے محبت ہے
    مگر میں کہ نہیں پایا
    وہ کاغذ لپٹا پڑا ہے دھول میں لیکن
    کسی کو دے نہیں پایا
    دوبارہ چاہ کر بھی میں محبت کر نہیں پایا
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  2. 30th May 2009, 09:10 PM #2
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    very nice aap ko kisi se mohabat hay
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    Quote maliksafdar said: View Post
    very nice aap ko kisi se mohabat hay
    ye chat room nhi hai
    or aise swalat yahan allow nhi hain




    very nice poetry...
    kept up....
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  4. 31st May 2009, 02:47 PM #4
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    very good and very nice
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    So Nice Dear...!

    Wesy agr isy DEC. k aakhri din post kartein to G bally bally ho jati...!
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    great bro...
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    Nice sharing
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    very nice
    MUST READ
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    Thnxx Malik ,thnxx Hoor ,zeshan Andd All Of U For Liking Poetryy
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    Bohat khoob, jari rakhen Kainat ....
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    السلام علیکم و رحمتہ و برکاتہ
    بہت اچھی شیئرنگ کی آپ نے
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