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    Post Pls Pls I M New In This Site.so Pls Give Me Ur Opinion.that's My Own.


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    hmm boht he aachi ha g

    mazeed aap key itneeeee aachi aachi poetry and sharing ka intazaar rahy ga
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    Salam u alaikum
    first of all wellcome to ITDUnya ......
    wah Taab g excellent poetry boht khoob really achi poetry kerti hia aap nice work welldone waiting for more koshish ki jaiy kai urdu rasmulkhat mai likha i mean inpage mai any way nice sharing
    take care
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    Assalaam o Alaiekum

    Wellcome to the www.itdunya.com tayyiaba g

    Nice too meet you

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    Bohat Achi Shring Ki Hai Aap Ne.........
    Nice To See You Welcome To Itdunya.........Enjoy.
    Khush Rahiye....

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    salam keya hal hai aap main khurram shahzad nice poetry aap koshesh karo na urdu main post karny ki yahan aap ko bohat kuch mily ga nice keep it up
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    thanks 4 all of u.aap nay meri poetry like ki.insha allah main koshish karoon gi k ho saka to urdu main bhi send karoon.aap sab ka bohat bohat shukriya.`

    khuda karay zindage ki hazarron khushian milay aap ko`
    chahay us khushi main hum hoon na hoon```
    na ho kabhi gam ka ghuzar aap ki zindage main
    `chahay us zindage main hum hoon na hoon
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    TAKE CARE.ALLAH HAFIZ.REGARDS TAYYIABA

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    Quote tayyiaba said: View Post
    thanks 4 all of u.aap nay meri poetry like ki.insha allah main koshish karoon gi k ho saka to urdu main bhi send karoon.aap sab ka bohat bohat shukriya.`

    khuda karay zindage ki hazarron khushian milay aap ko`
    chahay us khushi main hum hoon na hoon```
    na ho kabhi gam ka ghuzar aap ki zindage main
    `chahay us zindage main hum hoon na hoon
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    TAKE CARE.ALLAH HAFIZ.REGARDS TAYYIABA
    theek hai aap koshesh karo urdu main post karny ki theek hai na good

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    bhot achi sharing hai and welcome to itdunya.com

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    Kamal hai janab.........

    huda karay zindage ki hazarron khushian milay aap ko`
    chahay us khushi main hum hoon na hoon```
    na ho kabhi gam ka ghuzar aap ki zindage main
    `chahay us zindage main hum hoon na hoon
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    aap se mil kar bohat khsuhi hoi
    main bhi poetry karti hon
    hamari jori khooooob jame gi
    ati rahei ga itdunya par welcome to ap ko kar cuki hon already

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