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    Default ~~So rahaa thaa to shor barpaa thaa~~


    ~~~MERI PASAN'D~~~
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    So rahaa thaa to shor barpaa thaa
    Uth ke dekhaa to mai'n akelaa thaa

    Khaak par merey Khuwaab bikhrey they
    Aur mai'n rezaa rezaa chuntaa thaa

    Chaar jaanib wujood ki deewaar
    apni aawaaz mai'n he suntaa thaa

    U'mr bhar boo'nd boo'nd ko tarsey
    Saamney ghar ke ek dariyaa thaa

    Lab-e-dariyaa kharey rahey dono'n
    Wo bhi piyasaa thaa mai'n bhi piyasaa thaa...**

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    nice sharing.........

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    Bohut great ,, our very nice sharing hay g..

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    Very nice shairy hafeez bro...*

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    اسلام علیکم
    بہت خوب .... عمدہ انتخاب
    امید ہے آپ اُردو ادب کے بزم
    کو اسی طرح اچھے اور
    معیاری اشعار سے سجاتے رہینگے
    شکریہ
    محسود

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