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  1. 22nd November 2009, 11:51 AM #13
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    Quote Dr_death said: View Post
    wah wah wah kya baaat hai
    buhat he kHoob
    kamal kr diya aap nay

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    Pasand kerne ka shukriya...!!
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    Assalam o Alaikum . . !
    . . . .
    Aasi Bhai bohat khob nice sharing . . ,

    Lekin Aasif bhai ye phela shaer Parven shakir ka nai .. . ,
    Ye bohat famous ghazal hai Sef ki . . ,
    Jiska Phela misra hai ,
    Meri Dastan e Asrat Woh Suna suna ke roye,
    Mere aazmane wale mujhe azma ke roye,
    Or aakhri misra arz karta hu,
    Kahe Saif Raste wo Mile To Unse kehna,
    Hum udaas hai akele mere pass aa ke roye ,

    Please correction kare,
    Thanks.
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    Quote Gr8^Masood said: View Post
    Assalam o Alaikum . . !
    . . . .
    Aasi Bhai bohat khob nice sharing . . ,

    Lekin Aasif bhai ye phela shaer Parven shakir ka nai .. . ,
    Ye bohat famous ghazal hai Sef ki . . ,
    Jiska Phela misra hai ,
    Meri Dastan e Asrat Woh Suna suna ke roye,
    Mere aazmane wale mujhe azma ke roye,
    Or aakhri misra arz karta hu,
    Kahe Saif Raste wo Mile To Unse kehna,
    Hum udaas hai akele mere pass aa ke roye ,

    Please correction kare,
    Thanks.
    Masood Bhai! Aap ne jis ghazal ka zikr kya hai woh bohat famous ghazal hai Mein ne check kya hai ... lakin uss mein yeh wala shehr nahin hai...Mein koshish kerta hon agar mujhe puri ghazal mili tu mein share keron ga...INSHALLAH ...Thanksss for reply ...!!
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    wah wah
    kamaal ki sharing hai janaab

    Pervin shaakir and Faraz both r my fav
    thanks 4 this lovely sharing.......!!
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    very nice reply !!!!
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  6. 27th November 2009, 02:41 AM #18
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    Quote Aasi_786 said: View Post


    Masood Bhai! Aap ne jis ghazal ka zikr kya hai woh bohat famous ghazal hai Mein ne check kya hai ... lakin uss mein yeh wala shehr nahin hai...Mein koshish kerta hon agar mujhe puri ghazal mili tu mein share keron ga...INSHALLAH ...Thanksss for reply ...!!
    Aasi Bhai Mujhy Conferm Shor hai ke ye shar Pervin shakir ka nahi hai
    or Jo ghazal aap ne chack ki ye shar ussi ka essa hai.....mere pass book mei mujood hai..........***
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    Boht Khoob
    Great Poetry
    Thanks For Sharing....
    آئی ٹی دنیامیں سیگنیچرز میں اتنے بڑے سائز کی امیج لگانا سختی کے ساتھ منع ہے۔۔۔آئی ٹی دنیا ٹیم
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    nice
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    Quote Gr8^Masood said: View Post


    Aasi Bhai Mujhy Conferm Shor hai ke ye shar Pervin shakir ka nahi hai
    or Jo ghazal aap ne chack ki ye shar ussi ka essa hai.....mere pass book mei mujood hai..........***
    Theek hai Masood bhai mein iss ko edit ker k dobara share kerta hoon ...Thanksss for correction ....!!
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    Theek hai Masood bhai mein iss ko edit ker k dobara share kerta hoon ...Thanksss for correction ....!!
    You Are welcome...,

    And the poet name is saif ud din saif ....
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    شیئر کرنے کا شُکریہ
    اُمید ہے کہ آپ اردو ادب کو اچھے اشعار سے نوازتے رہیں گے
    سُلطانہ مُصطفیٰ
    نماز کو بہتر کیسے بنایا جائے
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