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    Unhappy *~مستقل درد کی پوشاک پہن کر آئے ~*

    مستقل درد کی پوشاک پہن کر آئے
    کوچۂ یار سے ہم خاک پہن کر آئے
    اب یہ گستاخ نگاہوں سے شکایت کیسی
    پیرہن آپ ہی بیباک پہن کر آئے
    دل جو ٹکڑوں میں بٹا ہے تو عجب کیا اس میں
    ہم لبادہ بھی تو صد چاک پہن کر آئے
    تیر ے کوچے میں تو بس پھول ہوا کرتے تھے
    لوٹ کر ہم خس و خاشاک پہن کر آئے
    ہم زمیں زادے ذرا شاد ہوئے تو یاسر
    رنگ افسوس کا افلاک پہن کر آئے
    ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~

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    Nice Hafeez Bhai
    Bhot achi poetry hay

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    بہت خوب جی
    عمدہ غزل بانٹی ہے آپ نے
    شکریہ اور خوش رہیں
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    اِحتیاط سے پھینکو سنگ بدگُمانی کے
    دوستی کے آئینے ان سے ٹُوٹ جاتے ہیں

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    Very nice sharing,
    Thanks for sharing,

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    nice yaar
    thanx 4 sharing

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    Bohat umdha...thanks for sharing

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    nice shairing...

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    Quote DiL Da JaNi said: View Post
    nice shairing...
    Quote nahid said: View Post
    Bohat umdha...thanks for sharing
    Quote shehzad iqbal said: View Post
    nice yaar
    thanx 4 sharing
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    Very nice sharing,
    Thanks for sharing,
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    بہت خوب جی
    عمدہ غزل بانٹی ہے آپ نے
    شکریہ اور خوش رہیں
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    thanks for sharing
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    Nice Hafeez Bhai
    Bhot achi poetry hay

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    اسلام علیکم
    بہت خوب .... عمدہ انتخاب
    امید ہے آپ اُردو ادب کے بزم
    کو اسی طرح اچھے اور
    معیاری اشعار سے سجاتے رہینگے
    شکریہ
    محسود

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    ہم زمیں زادے ذرا شاد ہوئے تو یاسر
    رنگ افسوس کا افلاک پہن کر آئے
    ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~




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    very nice

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