jese halaat chal rahey hain watan e aziz ke abhi
din ho ya raat , sakoon fanaa ho jataa hai
Bahot Khoob
hafiz sahab aap ke iradoon ko allah taala istqamat de
yeh aap ka behtreen adbi namoona hai
bohat khoob bhai..........mainay bhi abhi kal raat ek nazam likhi hai...
aab kia kahhon is shair k bary main........ ye to sach much shair(loin) hai..............
tazaa waqiaa lagttaa ha????????????????????????????
wa janab kea baat hai
keep it up
aap ki aur poetry ka intazar rahy ga
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Chotoo..
Agar Ees Shair ki Tashrih Ki Jay Tu Kia Hoogi?
Plzzz Mujhy Samjha Dooo
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